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Posted 20 July 2010 - 08:39 PM

Here is something I made yesterday,
It took me about 2 hours to get where it is now.
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Posted 21 July 2010 - 05:41 PM

looks good
lines make it have a vector feel to it.

This is my opinion only but somthing looks off at the top left quarter.
mabe add some smudged circles behind his head and that area.
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Posted 22 July 2010 - 11:32 AM

I'd work on text, depth and lighting. Lines looks a bit off for me...

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Posted 23 July 2010 - 11:31 AM

I really like what you've done on the left, with the clouds and render and the lines complementing it all.

The right side kinda kills it IMO. But I see where you're coming from.

Keep going!

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Posted 24 July 2010 - 01:35 AM

What do you guys think now?
I just edited it again.
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Posted 30 August 2010 - 07:20 AM

It looks better now, I think.

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